CELPIP Goal
Lesson 328 min

Task 1: Write an effective email

Choose the right tone and organize your email around the requested points.

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Work through each lesson and mark the module complete when you finish practising.

Match your reader and purpose

Choose a greeting and closing that fit the relationship. Dear Ms. Lee and Kind regards suit many professional messages. Hi Alex and Best may suit a friend. Keep the tone consistent throughout the email.

Open with the reason for writing: “I am writing to report a problem with the heating in my apartment.” Add the context your reader needs, then explain each requested point in a logical order. Finish with a clear request or next step and an appropriate closing.

Develop each point with a useful detail

A practical structure is: greeting → purpose → developed points → requested action → closing. Adapt the number of paragraphs to the prompt rather than forcing every email into a fixed template.

Weak: “The service was bad. Please fix it.”

Stronger: “The replacement part arrived five days after the promised date, so I could not use the machine during our busiest week. Could you refund the express delivery charge?”

The stronger version explains the issue, its consequence, and a realistic solution. Avoid threats, exaggerated praise, and long background stories that do not help the reader act.

Mini-test

Check your understanding

Which opening best suits a formal complaint?

Put this lesson into practice

Apply what you learned in a timed Writing exercise, then review one specific area to improve.

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